So all the stages of revision (the big three) got done and in the process of the last one I realized that I’d lost something somewhere…cut & didn’t paste, and since I’d chosen “cut” the something was long gone lost. I’d have to write it again. Which I did one day this past week and I like it better than the first version. Then I went on with the spit-polishing of the surface and finished that Friday. Yesterday morning, Saturday, I was primed for a day of loafing–or at least working on other things like having actual *space* in the study, nothing on the floor (!!!) instead of the Useful Books now there, along with the many not-useful things.
But wait! Something was stirring. Something had hold of my brain and was yanking at me. “Come here! Don’t do that! Come HERE and sit DOWN and put fingers on the keyboard and get going!!!”
And out came…the start of NewBook II or Horngard II. “But, but, but,” I stammered. “I have other things to do! I need to go do this, and go do that, and go do the other thing, lots of things have gone undone since I started NewBook I!”
And the book said “Nonsense. Keep going.” Ten pages later that was it for the day.
It’s not even noon yet and another ten pages has appeared in the file.
“But I have to do these things…”
“No, you don’t. Shut up, quit arguing, and get going…this train is leaving the station, toot-toot-toot, and you’d better be on it or be sorry.”
“But I haven’t heard back from my agent, and shouldn’t I wait until…?”
“NO!”
“But there’s a weather change and it might finally rain and I need to spread seed, and…”
“NO!”
You know what’s really, really, really fun…is the feel of being on a fast-moving book with the story pouring into your head and out through your fingers. Even if you’re eating unhealthy food, your neck hurts, your finger joints are beginning to burn, one leg’s going to sleep…it’s really, really fun to have live characters doing their thing right there in front of you, and the book’s plot daemon prodding you in the ribs: “Hurry up! Get that bit—right there–that’s good, keep going, don’t stop, yeah!!!”
I do have to go feed horses their lunch, even if the book’s hollering at me. I’ll be back. How many pages today? I have no idea. What’s going to happen? I have no idea except that I’ll be spending time in this chair and more Story will be in the file. and I’ll be grinning at times and tapping my foot and thinking how very lucky I am in some back corner of my mind while the rest is occupied playing all the instruments in the orchestra at once. Hooyah!
Comment by Caryn — October 16, 2022 @ 12:06 pm
Wonderful!!
Comment by Bill Ruppert — October 16, 2022 @ 4:24 pm
Sounds great!
Comment by Llink — October 17, 2022 @ 6:35 am
I’m not an author, but even as an engineer sometimes a design calls to you from the void and demands to exist. The only thing that you can do to is listen and make it real.
I’m excited to get more stories from Paksworld, even if I didn’t expect it with the paladins legacy series wrapping things up neatly in most places. But now my mind is running about how things progressed especially with Camwyn, Dorrin’s squires, Burek, the kuakgan in lyona, and my favorite Elis amongst other.
Love the world, love the stories, and I am excited to see what facets of the world we get to explore next. And I wish you the best helping newbook ii come into the world.